PM sent to Crowley

[The Preceptor]

Hi there. First of all, let me welcome you to the site I've just finished going over your application and there are a few things that need to be tweaked:


1. Please make sure you read the site plot because our story picks up near the end of season five and branches off in our own direction. Crowley isn't the King of Hell and there was never any Purgatory deals made between Crowley and Cas, nor was there ever a deal made for Bobby's soul, etc.

2. Your history has a few run-on sentences that make it a bit difficult to read. Please proofread and make any corrections necessary.

3. Yes, sorry, you need to let us know what your character's biggest secret is


When you've made the required changes to your application and are ready for it to be looked at again, please reply to your application thread and let us know.

Thanks and good luck

[Deleted]

It looks like he edited. I don't know if you've already looked at it or what.

[The Preceptor]

Yeah I just wanted to get a second opinion before accepting him, but it looks good to me